雅思写作结尾方法。一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于雅思高分大作文来讲无疑是需要的,尽管最后评分的主要依据并非由结尾段决定的,但结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是必不可少的。下面是记者收拾的雅思写作结尾方法,期望能帮到你!
雅思写作结尾方法一
大家都知道,一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分雅思大作文来讲无疑是需要的。而对于追求行文简洁的前雅考虑官simon,在他的雅思写作模板里,留给结论段的空间只有1句话。没错,有且只有1句话来扫尾。这让不少习惯在文章末尾还大篇幅地讨论,进而收不了尾形成了鲜明的对比,一块儿通过实例来看看他是怎么样漂亮结尾我们的文章的吧。
不过,第一呢,要看看他对于雅思task2的结尾段的理解:
Conclusions are actually quite simple. The purpose of the conclusion is to answer the question in the title. Do this by referring to the points you have already made in the main body. Don’t repeat whole sentences, just summarise the main points. It is also important that you do not raise any new ideas in the conclusion. The conclusion need not be long. Keep it brief and make sure it is directly related to the question.
雅思作文的结论部分事实上相当简单。结论部分的目的是回答作文话题中的提出问题。你可以通过提及你在主体部分所论述的看法来回答。不要完全的重复整个句子,总结概括要素就好了。另外要紧的一点是不要在结论部分提出新的看法。结论部分不许要冗长。要保证简要准确地并有关。
在这里呢,simon其实提醒了烤鸭们在结尾段总是容易出错的2点:
1.大段重复前面主体段里的看法;2.提出新的看法。他觉得,结论段,仅在于概括式地重申前文的看法。
范例1:2连问题型
话题:Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
对于这种“two-part”question,simon的处置方法是4段式,导入+主题段1+主题段2+结论。前面的内容,就略过了,直接看他的结论段的写法。
In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.
稍稍拆解下这个句子,其实是讲了“看法”+“期待/目的”,看法是应该给予当地电影业更多的财政支持,目的是为了让它有能力同现在支配着电影市场的国外电影一较高下。中间用一个and连接,可以说自然而简明,丝毫没非“从句”和“非谓语动词结构”等复杂语法不可的架势。应该注意指出的是,他所提到的“给予更多的财政支持”和“国外电影居市场的主导地位”都是前文都已经提到的看法。机尾段重点在于“转述”看法,切不可提出新的看法来。
范例2:赞同与否题型
话题:The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
这是大家最容易见到的赞同与否题型,普通的行为思路有三种“agree”,“disagree”,“partly agree”。在这,simon选择的是partly agree,还是直接跳到结尾段。
In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.
可以发现,对于如此的题型,由于采取的是partly agree的立场,所以,使用了最吻合立场的“although”从句来表转折。
雅思写作结尾方法二
回顾全文+看法+展望:
这种结尾方法最适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,大家应该注意的是结尾段由三个要点组成,其中第2个要点是需要的,但句子的数目可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。第一大家来看一个例子:
I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testingnew products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animaltesting is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new andwonderful ways。
上面这个例句中,作者将我们的看法隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后,起到了一个欲扬先抑的成效。但这种成效需要搭配一个展望将来才能起到渲染的成效。大家来对比另外一个例子:
In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline.However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a worldwith less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to beresponsible。
大伙不难发现,2个句子都用了一样的衔接方法,即首句委婉地回顾全文,将看法的对立面用“让步”的方法表达出来,同时也是对于主体段看法的回顾。然后再是用转折讲解我们的怎么看和看法。最后再用一个对于将来的期望来支撑我们的看法。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有非常不错的总结,但同时看法又是很鲜明有力的,加上对于将来的润色,使得表达更流畅。用同样的办法,大家再来看第三个例句:
To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increasedlevels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if allits people are educated to the maximum of their ability。
和前2个结尾不同,第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但它将作者的看法和对将来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。这样就给出了大家在架构“展望将来”时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在看法句之后。此种结尾进步方法同样适用于剖析解决型大作文的结尾段布局,譬如:
All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate,there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs onsociety. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore。
对于毒品对社会的害处,作者先是承认近况的没办法改变,进而乐观地讲解了我们的看法即采取了切实有效的行动后可以减弱其风险。最后用毒品的害处性来对将来作展望。换句话说,在社会类剖析解决型议论文中,大家在展望将来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为突破口。又如:
In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow morepeople to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have tochange if the country‘s people are to achieve their full potential。
雅思写作结尾方法三
招式1、回答问题 answer the question
E.g.1
When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.
这个结尾段落明确的提出了我们的看法,不是所有些科技都是好的,但科技更不是完全没用处的。
招式2、不要添加新的信息 not apply any new information
E.g.2
Happiness is considered to be very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.
用1句话明确我们的看法,幸福非常难概念,可能有两个原因起到用途。
招式3、2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are enough
E.g.3
Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.
2句话,作者的态度非常明确,学生不可能花所有些时间去学习,否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣,所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。
一般在结尾段的最开始部分,考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词,让考官知道文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句:
信号词:Finally, to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall
句型:
1. it can be concluded that…
2. we can find that…
3. I think it is also important to remember that
4. the main point is to make sure that
5. I believe that/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that
招式4、可使用的方法
1.总结式
把在前文中的看法在结尾段进行重述,但不可以出现与开头段或者题目中的单词重复。
E.g.4
*In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.
把solutions进行的简单的第三描写--爸爸妈妈、好的托儿所、政府的资金扶助。
*Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public.Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action.Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.
重述上文的内容,由政府采取手段—提升意识段已经描述过的,一般小作文结尾不再出现具体数据。缘由非常简单,结尾是一个总结总结的段落,而不是说明,所以数据在这里出现是极度不适合的。第二,数据了解明自然需要比较大的篇幅,这与大家提出的第一点是矛盾的,因此考生不要在结尾段加入一些已经描写叙述过的细节数据。
3、最好不要加入自己个人的看法。
雅思小作文的最重要原则是,就事论事,看图说话。依据给的图,折线图、柱状图、饼图等,进行数据剖析和总结,最后得到一个或几个结论,大家可以多看看雅思小作文范本。考生在总结过程中,只须写这个数据具体反映了什么,具体说明了什么即可,最多加一些趋势和走向或者提出这个不同可能与什么有关。而这类信息和内容也是要从图表中可以读到的。结尾段尽可能不要写新的东西,而是对之前段落的一个总结或者开头段落的一个复述,注意同义替换,尽可能不要重复用相同句型相同单词。
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